Evenfall (In the Company of Shadows, #1)

Evenfall (In the Company of Shadows, #1) - Santino Hassell,  Ais It was a long and tedious reading, I found myself struggling to finish the book.
Although it has a great plot and amazing characters, but to discover it
i had to fish the story in a soup of words.
I felt like reading an initial draft that lacks very basic editing.
it could be dramatically improve with letting go of fifty percent of it.
So much unnecessary information, dreary, wearisome not contribute anything to the plot, and when I finaly got to part that is significant to their relationship i felt it wasn't good enough not as strong as it could be .

I'd love to read the following sections only after significant editing .